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theladyblue
theladyblue
Dec 04, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Victrix Agreus

As my breath catches in my chest You sigh a wondrous whimsical sound Mine eyes weep diamond teardrops for you Watching the moons beams play on the black pearl sea Of your sharp kiss my lips ponder And as you gaze at me through the glass They smile a warm white dream for only you This love, I pray is not yet lost to the heart of Amica Power and love you give willingly And this heart and soul within itself are yours Not even Basilea, could demand more of this girl So the moon laughs at me as I dream of you and we slumber Peaceful am I in thoughts of you and I We smile in dreams as we play out the days of us Lost only to pain and despair, I sing of your integrity With every fiber, I swear, this body, mind, and soul loves you
— theladyblue, Dec 04, 2007

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meic

18 years 6 months ago

You are so good for me - you

You are so good for me - you exercise every faculty and enliven all my sensitivities. This engages mind and emotions in equal measure. Magnificent love poetry. INSIGHT "See Naples and die" they say. If you had seen what I had seen in just two moments in just two eyes you could happily die a thousand times. Mike
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 5 months ago

i bet you say that to all

i bet you say that to all the poets *wink* you know i have never seen anything but the fine state of arkansas...a few other cities outside but nothing more than passing through. my mind has been everywhere and because i think photographicly it works for me to read it one time and its like ive been there. im sure it still cant replace the real thing but my prince charming and i just havent quite made it that far...can you believe i am 25 years old, fought and won the battle of cancer, had two incredibly smart children, written over 200 poems, a novel(that has yet to be published) and i have never even seen the ocean... maybe my once upon a time was ment to be written...oh well, give me ink and i shall move along... "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie