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The Pedestrian

On this day, I sat outside at the cafe,

under a ceiling of a brilliant sky

which neither overwhelmed, nor betrayed the senses.

There I sat.....nursing my third latte,

when I noticed him.

 

He and his bright colors, and all...

..flashy dresser. How could I not notice him?

I believed him to be intoxicated.

 

The way he flittered his way

through the crowded array of tables...was so disruptive,

that it was calming, in a sort of way.

 

Then.....he must've decided to cross the street !

There was no reason for me to care one way or the other.

I had just laid eyes on him. But there I sat.....mesmerized.

 

He luckily blundered a good two-thirds into the street,

when disast-

-screech-

-splat-

He wound up on the hood of a brown Audi !

Stupid butterfly.

— docmaverick, Dec 04, 2007

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

Mark

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

Great ending a surprise

well crafted doc, the title holds ya back til the ending splats ya in the face. So slumber until the audi comes into the picture. This is really great work - poor unsuspecting beautiful winged insect ! Thanks, Mark a single point in the infinite circle am I
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

This reminded me of a poem of mine

The Suit Once I saw a man in a suit knocked down by a car He went rolling along the road, one shoe went off in another direction. He rolled into a sitting position, he had a small package in his hand. He raised it to his ear and shook it. Then he said fuckit and fell over and didn’t move any more. So sue me, I laughed. cheers, Jess