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Dec 04, 2007
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The Pedestrian
On this day, I sat outside at the cafe,
under a ceiling of a brilliant sky
which neither overwhelmed, nor betrayed the senses.
There I sat.....nursing my third latte,
when I noticed him.
He and his bright colors, and all...
..flashy dresser. How could I not notice him?
I believed him to be intoxicated.
The way he flittered his way
through the crowded array of tables...was so disruptive,
that it was calming, in a sort of way.
Then.....he must've decided to cross the street !
There was no reason for me to care one way or the other.
I had just laid eyes on him. But there I sat.....mesmerized.
He luckily blundered a good two-thirds into the street,
when disast-
-screech-
-splat-
He wound up on the hood of a brown Audi !
Stupid butterfly.
— docmaverick, Dec 04, 2007
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Critiques
Mark
18 years 6 months ago
Great ending a surprise
weirdelf
18 years 5 months ago
This reminded me of a poem of mine