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Dec 05, 2007
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WORDS
WORDS
In mountain meres in Mexico
swims the axolotl:
a tragic beast forever doomed
to live eternal youth
never to proudly strut the swampy shore
as salamander, fiery and full-grown
Such a word is affection,
mothered in friendship, fathered in love.
A Peter Pan of words, capable of growth
yet tending to remain a safe and carefree child Connection needs caution, I grant you [as a hand in a metaphor’s glove]: one could drown in the pool of affection
In mountain meres in Mexico
swims the axolotl:
a tragic beast forever doomed
to live eternal youth
never to proudly strut the swampy shore
as salamander, fiery and full-grown
Such a word is affection,
mothered in friendship, fathered in love.
A Peter Pan of words, capable of growth
yet tending to remain a safe and carefree child Connection needs caution, I grant you [as a hand in a metaphor’s glove]: one could drown in the pool of affection
for a lack of the sweet air of love.
Comments
theladyblue
18 years 5 months ago
hummm
meic
18 years 5 months ago
Thank you. I like amphibia -