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An evening with my angel

An evening with my angel

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It is very beautiful and cool

cause she agreed to come with me

There flowers are spraying their odur

cause to passify her mind

There is a full moon in that sky

to welcome my angel to that place

That evening expands it's time up to seven

to see her face and her beauty

Larks and birds are singing on trees

to test their voices with my angel

There the sky spreads the stars

to immitate my darling's smile

My angel came and smiled as ............

every thing  have gone with a shy

 

SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN

— SAKTHEEE2007, Dec 01, 2007

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