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A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man

— Sinbadthesailorman, Nov 30, 2007

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

Critiques

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

Nice thought sinbad...

Pleasant to read. I did feel a bt of a drop when you moved from the present to past tense. I wonder if you can keep this all in the now. The movement from the two parts is very smooth though. Thanks, Mark

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 6 months ago

wish I could dear fellow

things for me right now are all pastense for all is well with the children but, There is some kind of tenion in their house and I am being keep at bay by their mother and her boy friend though they see on the sly once and awhile the two eldest The little guy has no way to see me or I him with out great complacations I will see them for x-mas and new years if it kills their mother she alreadys knows I'll just go and get them but, that causes me problems afterwards But, I just dont Give a damn the jugde already knows if I so wish they'll leave the country with me For I have a few under handed friends who'll fly us anywhere I could aford to go But, she knows this would only be as a last resort for that to happen so I dont get pushed to hard I've kinda let things slide a bit But, alot I have on my plate right now and I dread more of the same next year

Mark

18 years 5 months ago

Sinbad

please do be in troubble OK?