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Betrayed

I lost my dear brother that day, my better half

I was betrayed to the sea of men

And no longer do I defend, the great halls in Heaven

That twisted day, i was thrown down and away from, his memory

And now am i gone, the price, it had to be paid

I was young and naive, unlike my shadow

My pride I fully followed, the others like a goat on a rope

Unknowingly being towed to an alter
 
A sacrifice, that would have split the heavens in half

It would have caused a great slaughter, and disrupted the rule

Following the leaders rule,  we were all just angels then

And the one man deionized, we called him The Adam

Then the Evening came, the plot was thickened

Grabbed away from those who would betray that day

i was hid, in the plain sight of day 

Cast amongst the waters now, i sail these oceans blue
 
Those who have won, call me Sinbad for sin is not good
 
I was once plain Donald a brother too

Michael, now our Lord's one and only Warrior
 
An Arched Angel, he was raised up

An i was cast down, but half way

The first twins set in Heaven, before and behind our Lord

 i Donald was betrayed by Lucifer

He who ruled the third most part of Heaven

And now i am  fallen,  nor more than an angel,  i must keep the balance even
 
Until the the Lord's Day

But, hidden among men i am not one of them

Therefore a Sailor

On the waves of mankind

 

A remembrance of Donald


— Sinbadthesailorman, Nov 30, 2007

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Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 5 months ago

This is also one of those which I m try to work in the book

But know the little grey box has turned on me An this may never come to pass plus I had a short story For X-mas More like and elfs nightmere Now For unless I can see the first few lines and each paragarph I wont ever be able to recall excatly how it goes plus I twenty two more peoms that were almost ready And their wern't back up on hard paper because I couldn't aforrd the ink just then Such Is my life Story though I'm Use to it. It still bums me way out and brings me way down And the bosses decide to have a X-mas party on one of the days of the week best for money making on the night shift tonight! Guess I could use the break though Donnie?/ Sinbad? who am I Lord Who Am I. Elvis I hope they have Kareoke tonight I haven't sung and three weeks and I suck at that too But,I could care less for it makes me feel good Peace out or at least get a piece. Donnie / Sinbad
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meic

18 years 6 months ago

For both parts - A heartfelt

For both parts - A heartfelt and moving tribute, and my sincere condolences. Merry Christmas & Happy New Year Nadolig llawen & blwyddyn newydd dda geseënde Kersfees & gelukkige nuwejaar Mike
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 5 months ago

No body die here if that is what your thinking their both

True to life Angels in the story I'm Writting their twins and Satan is trying to use the one against the other for only God can Destinugse them apart even while Donald is in his earthly form But this book may never come to pass but only in mind played out whenever I am done Donnie/ Sinbad