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Betrayed
I lost my dear brother that day, my better half
I was betrayed to the sea of men
And no longer do I defend, the great halls in Heaven
That twisted day, i was thrown down and away from, his memory
And now am i gone, the price, it had to be paid
I was young and naive, unlike my shadow
My pride I fully followed, the others like a goat on a rope
Unknowingly being towed to an alter
A sacrifice, that would have split the heavens in half
It would have caused a great slaughter, and disrupted the rule
Following the leaders rule, we were all just angels then
And the one man deionized, we called him The Adam
Then the Evening came, the plot was thickened
Grabbed away from those who would betray that day
i was hid, in the plain sight of day
Cast amongst the waters now, i sail these oceans blue
Those who have won, call me Sinbad for sin is not good
I was once plain Donald a brother too
Michael, now our Lord's one and only Warrior
An Arched Angel, he was raised up
An i was cast down, but half way
The first twins set in Heaven, before and behind our Lord
i Donald was betrayed by Lucifer
He who ruled the third most part of Heaven
And now i am fallen, nor more than an angel, i must keep the balance even
Until the the Lord's Day
But, hidden among men i am not one of them
Therefore a Sailor
On the waves of mankind
A remembrance of Donald
Critiques
IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
better then the first
Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 5 months ago
This is also one of those which I m try to work in the book
meic
18 years 6 months ago
For both parts - A heartfelt
Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 5 months ago
No body die here if that is what your thinking their both