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IKnowNoBox
Nov 29, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Silly Putty Girl Vs. Master Baiter

                   Round 1

 " Hello,nice to

meet you ."

 

"Uh hi...have

 we met...?"

 

"Nice shoes!"

 

"Why thanks

I just bought

them..."

 

  *Whoa!*

Flag on the play

he was there

when she got

them at the mall!

 

   Round 1 to him...

 

      Round 2

"Hello ...you look

familiar."

 

"Really?Have I

met you before

somewhere?"

 

"You went to

Duncan Myer

High.Right?"

 

"Yea! I did

did you ...?"

 

"Yea ...Go Duncan

 High Rangers!"

 

   *Whoa! What a hook! *

   Flag on the play

   she has a class

   bumper sticker

   on her car.

 

    Round 2 to him.

 

  Round 3

 

"Hello we haven't

 meet yet."

 

"I'm sorry how

sould I know you?"

 

"I'm a friend

of Inez."

 

"Oh I know her

 too..."

 

 *Whoa!That was

  a smooth line!*

 

Flag on the play

she picks her friend

up from work every

other day and

she wears a

name tag at work

 

 Round 3 to him

she is  putty in his hands

 


— IKnowNoBox, Nov 29, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Ancientone

18 years 6 months ago

Whoa...

where did this get the master? LMAO Cute! :) Read my Egos for a clue. :) Patrick/AO
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musicguru

18 years 6 months ago

that was a fun read

nice to see fresh ideas like that...very cool very fun
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 6 months ago

It is inspired by a conversation...

I had with a member on this site,about stalkers and how they operate. Did you know the song by DiDo is about a female stalker. We tell our children to be cautios of strangers... but what of our impressionable collage age young adults. This match went to the stalker he used easy bait.She took it hook line and cliche. In ink, Dabbler
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Carrie G

18 years 6 months ago

Formatting

I love the idea of a poem like a play - the blurring of genres. And the formatting (the bold, etc) is elucidating.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 6 months ago

Thank you a lesson for

those who think stalking won't happen to them. A blur between genres...thank you.I wanted to remove myself in the perspective to that of a refree.Skit written is something I have been studying as well. Remember let your Silly Putty Friends know there are little flags that expose suspicious would be stalkers. In ink, David
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

Right out of my field

the very idea of pickup is anathema to me now. Just want friends, hugs and occasionally friendly sex with said friends. Well more than occasionally would be better. Sex with strangers, eeew. I must be getting old. cheers, Jess
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cricket

18 years 5 months ago

I think I

have dicussed this with you.. and I learned alot form you. this played out just as you were telling me.. and i like the way you put the flag in there to show what she had just done .. he did get her hook , line and sinker.. a scarey thought.. great job on this poem though. thanks.cricket
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cricket

18 years 5 months ago

Yes I have

become cautious, more than scared now.. and the poem I write was inspired by the teen friends of my kids. that think this can never happen to them.. wow,, I inspired something.lol... thanks friend.cricket
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IKnowNoBox

17 years 4 months ago

That does imply

a guy stroking his.. ego. At the expense of a niaive female.. Thank you for reading DP. In ink, Dabbler
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Calliope

17 years 4 months ago

My dear friend ,one of my first on neopoet

Good to be back and see one of your poems .Powerful write and very instructive,lol,I am a bit cautious of such people for i have had bad experiences and this poem says it all.Bravo! Lacy P.S. Love the form. Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
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IKnowNoBox

17 years 4 months ago

Hi Lacy it is good to be back.

I was reminince of Actors Play House Skits while writing this, As Cricket mentions it was inspired in part by a chat in the then new chat. I look forward to seeing your current writes. In ink, Davidx
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VAMPIREBLONDE

17 years 4 months ago

Your writing here is a good

Your writing here is a good lesson for all to learn. When my daughter was little I never put her name on shirts or anything for fear someone would call her by her name and she would think they knew her somehow.