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Before They're Mourned

I sat at the pool of life with my legs in the water,

stirring the echoes with my feet.

How refreshing after my walk uphill.

Sometimes rest isn't enough,

and time can wait on me, for a change.

 

So, I reached into the calm...

..put both hands into the water...

..and splashed my face with the moments,

letting them run down my brow, and chin.

How refreshing after my walk uphill,

but, the splash was not enough.

So time had no choice, but to wait a little longer.

 

Once in the pool, I swam.

So fluid were my movements against the grains of time.

Then, the moments that time had borrowed from me.....re-appeared,

reminding me to savor them, rather than to miss them.

For time can only pause-and then, only long enough to remind you,

that life is fragile.

And we must use the time allotted to us...

..to savor each future missing moment,

before they're mourned.

 

— docmaverick, Nov 29, 2007

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

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guardian

18 years 6 months ago

Refreshing piece

For me this was inspritational we often do not allow time to feel, savor or express our emotions of memories. This offers a cleansing effect in the reading of this poem. Well crafted poem enjoyed. guardian
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

A beautiful and profound poem.

My only crit is in the second last line. Not just future moments, the ones happening right now. Perhaps that is part of the advice/preachiness I object to. cheers, Jess
docmaverick

docmaverick

18 years 5 months ago

but,

the "now" moments ARE included in the "future" moments. That's why I said it that way. having a good holiday, are we? doc.