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Held By His Hands
The wounded sparrow spirals downward out of the sky.
On gilded wings, she flew.
Struck by an arrow, she plummets.
Faster! Faster! To the rocks below.
Out of control, she catches the wind
And glides unsteadily into a beautiful palm tree.
Dates are clustering everywhere in the beautiful palm
Whose bent and willowy trunk has withstood
Many, many storms of the worst kind...
So she has food to eat.
The scent of rain brings refreshing dewdrops
And forms tiny pools of crystal clear liquid
In the bends of the leaves...
So she has water to drink.
With the raging storm at hand, she hides beneath
The shelter of the huge palm fronds.
Their gentle caresses touch her broken wing,
And soon she starts to fly again. She may fly unsteadily, yet she flies.
Touched by the very Hand of God,
She continues her journey towards home.
Wolfycat.
Critiques
Mark
18 years 6 months ago
Nice Story Wolfy !
wolfycat
18 years 6 months ago
This is a true story...
Mark
18 years 6 months ago
On the second read
wolfycat
18 years 6 months ago
Thank you, Mark...
IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
Good to read you again Cat
wolfycat
18 years 6 months ago
Thanks so much...
Mark
18 years 1 month ago
Wolfy
wolfycat
18 years ago
Hi Mark...