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Hospital Blues

ive got those hospital blues
and my drugged mind
is desperately searching for clues
to aid the the doctors
in healing my battered body
which they have all criticised
they say the workmanship is shody
but hey! i say thats not my fault
i arrived in this place by default

— Lenny of Cohen, Nov 28, 2007

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dbrock

18 years 6 months ago

LMAO - luv the honesty & it

LMAO - luv the honesty & it made me laugh! you're so...you, Lenny of Cohen :) hugz, donna