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Nov 28, 2007
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Hospital Blues
ive got those hospital blues
and my drugged mind
is desperately searching for clues
to aid the the doctors
in healing my battered body
which they have all criticised
they say the workmanship is shody
but hey! i say thats not my fault
i arrived in this place by default
— Lenny of Cohen, Nov 28, 2007
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IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
hOW CAN WE TELL THEM WE FEEL BETTER
dbrock
18 years 6 months ago
LMAO - luv the honesty & it