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Nov 27, 2007
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Rejected
In your eyes I will never be up to par
On my skin you became an unhealed scar
You said that my dream was a waste of time
I tried to see how as I invested my every dime
The criticizing seemed to be on quite a rise
My emotions must have hit you like a surprise
You looked at me as if I did you wrong
You said that my determination is not that strong
A teacher that denied me a chance to achieve
Some kind of answer I have yet to receive
Was I a failure or were you sure I would fail
Sorry to tell you that this here ship set sail
No words or actions can steer my direction
I laugh at the finger pointing and rejection
You said no but something within said yes
My dreams were pursued with little stress
I put my pen to work as you looked the other way
From my word I will never find the courage to walk away
I could walk with a smile but I’d rather keep walking
On a path of impossible dreams and not trash talking
— paul, Nov 27, 2007
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Mark
18 years 6 months ago
uhh yup