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The Fall

Be an example of what is true,

seek to the innocent ways of a child...

..and be mindfull in all you do.

And know your actions are your legacy.

Speak of skies and rainbows,

and show humility.

Be careful, the Fall...

..for it is coming.

 

I had on new shoes, ones that I was assured knew their way,

my vision was focused,

and I was mindful of all around me...

..and my actions were my legacy.

Gone were the skies and rainbows,

for those things fade and change.

Then I fell.

It had come to fruition.

 

 

Now I know to own each moment I walk through,

as best as I can.

Even though my shoes were now scuffed,

my hair was mussed, and my clothes askew...

..I held my head as high as possible,

and succombed, not

to the Fall.

And my actions will forever be, my legacy.

— docmaverick, Nov 27, 2007

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

Mark

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

Hi Doc a plan fulfilled

is being confronted with my sister in law in february at my Mom's 80th. It's about time afer some 20 years that we hold each other and "make up" yes? An inspiration that will make alot of people happy in your poetry. Thanks, Mark
docmaverick

docmaverick

18 years 6 months ago

The Mark...

..usually you're right on it. However, in this regard I can only say, that one cannot send another to view the valley from the hilltop, that view must be viewed for one's own self. For only then, can one truly "own" that vista. I probably said it wrong, or was unclear... but, I had every intention of making sense.:-) doc.
Mark

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

Yes When I am

confused I am definitely "off the mark" But I agree on the ownership point or point of view. Mark
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

To Mark and Doc

When we send our poetry into the world we give it as a gift to our readers, Marks feelings and response are as true as your poetry, Doc. We cannot control our reader. Often I have found beauty and meaning in a poem completely different from what the poet intended, cheers, Jess
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

I loved the second and third stanzas but in the first one you

I loved the second and third stanzas but in the first one you fell into the trap of of offering advice or preaching again. You know that is a pet hate of mine. Keep it if you will, I only offer my personal opinion. The last line is a profound human truth. cheers, Jess