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CHRYSALIS

The question you pose:
how I compose my party pieces
and pen my paltry poems, salty tales or plain-writ lines.
So close your eyes, my precious,
fluff the cushions, recline, open ears and mind,
and visualise.

Imagine, if you will, a scattered clump
of plump industrious caterpillars hump-stumping
through the ganglionic cortical maze,
nose-nudging a reluctant neurone here,
sparking a sluggish synapse there;
a herd of diligent neurotransmitters
winkling out wedges of memory, slivers of speech
and great drifts of discussion and debate.
You can trace their silken tracks with ease,
estimate their direction, describe the lucid structure
of every unremarkable linguistic task.

Imagine further, as you must,
a sudden interruption to this cosy round
which sends one such sorry caterpillar all of scurry
to find a comfy corner, spin a silvered net
to catch itself, attach itself and palpitate alone.
Look carefully and you’ll remark
an unexpected hardening of soft skin
turned architectural, translucent, crystalline.
Within you see – in glimpses – the roiling
moil of mixed and molten images
a semiotic stew of private symbols, public signs
and, every now and then, a word or two you understand.
If you’re very careful, and you bide your time,
you may slip inside a simile or two
or mix a metaphor within the brew.
And all this time the exoskeleton takes the strain,
tectonic distortions on a micro scale,
and shows some semblance of the life within
and, more important, of the life to be.

The shifting drifting reconstructions rumble on
until a sudden seismic shudder shakes the case,
a crack appears, gapes and gives release
to green full-grown imago, wet and trembling
on the very verge of flight.

In the sunlight, wings full spread,
the butterfly takes the air:
and I can pin and pen
the fulgent new-born words
upon the pristine page.

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Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 5 months ago

Mike wow

great stuff how long have you to work on a piece before it reals its self to you I get the feeling you know what it is you write where I myself am still trying to figure it out and some time don't even understand what it is or where it comes from I have been on many prescribed drugs for pain and feel that I dont fully see the pitcure as you do here I just write and it seem to me that you plan out your work with great detail nice job
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meic

18 years 5 months ago

CHRYSALIS

Time taken: Different poems, different time-scales - and not necessarily related to either length or complexity! I was once asked how I composed a poem: Did I just “let it all flow out?”; Did I revise the result? Did I plan [as in a flow-chart] the outline first? Did I follow any traditional model? Since I did none of those things, I was at a bit of a loss. My poems sort of grow – they are truly organic. Thus began a search for a metaphor, a starting point. The concept of the chrysalis is the nearest I can get: the internal re-distribution and re-assembly of cells of the pupated larva [i.e. within the chrysalis case] is similar to the mix of private images - which not may not verbal and may be meaningful only to me - and ordinary public language. All of which I can ‘read’ in some way within the structure of the growing poem. The chrysalis case reflects the overall shape of the adult being produced within: likewise I am aware throughout the process of the general shape of the developing poem, but not necessarily the details. So, for what it’s worth, the above is what ‘grew’ that time. Thanks for the complimentary comment, though I'm much more intuitive than it appears. Mike
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 5 months ago

It's maybe

at this time in your or mines life that you are more focus with yourself and it show through in your writtings I'll have to share the time I have with the others as I use A Libary's computer and your stuff Like mine is quite lenghty Please for give spelling Bad head ache today plus I can't spell that well with out the spell check
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 5 months ago

I would be jealous of such

I would be jealous of such eloquence if i weren't in awe. I shall sit in your footnotes, so that I might one day be so great!!! <3 Emarie
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meic

18 years 5 months ago

I didn’t think I could

I didn't think I could still blush! But I'm sure I could find a much more comfortable seating arrangement. [wink] Mike
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poewriter58

18 years 3 months ago

Perfect metaphor

This work is absolutely outstanding , It is difficult to put into words how ones work is formed. I have never heard it put so eloquently as this . Truly a work of art Chrys
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jaxarrow

18 years 3 months ago

chrysalis

hi, this is my first tentative exploration of a poetry site,with a view to maybe sharing/showing a couple of my own. Chrysalis is one of the first i have read and has inspired me to go ahead and join in! I think its a great piece of writing,instantly forming and flowing crystal clear images in my head!! thanx!
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meic

18 years 3 months ago

If my poem has inspired you

If my poem has inspired you to join us here at neopoet, that is praise enough indeed. I'm sure you won't regret sharing your work. Iechyd da [Good Health - Welsh] Mike