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to hell and back

Prelude:

A crimson angel
Adorned in wings of black
Had little more than intention
Strapped to her back
As she strode to the sidewalk
And summoned her demon cabbie

See, it was here her journey began
On the streets of a hellish place,
Where she came to know herself
And the others without name or face,
Here it shall end all too soon yet
She may very well be the bravest of all

You will know her only once
Lady of death, collector of souls
Sadly only her cabbie knows
For whom her final bell tolls
She smiles at you & you think you know?
But sinner or saint…you have no idea



Now curled in shock
Death’s last quake
Caught in motion
Feel the wetness
Seep from within
It is surprisingly warm
And you feel
Sick…
Perverse even
Wondering why it is over
But happy still

No one
Can know now
How you smirk
In face of your demon cabbie
But he knows
You are thrilled with fate
And fate is delighted with you
Who chooses heaven or hell?
Who cares…
But this I know

Feast tonight
For in hell we dine
And tomorrows trumpets
Will sound a bright hymn of
New World order
or so they say
For the demon’s dreams
Lay not buried
— theladyblue, Nov 27, 2007

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meic

18 years 6 months ago

Yep … balance is insanely

Yep ... balance is insanely difficult on the fulcrum of fate. Technically, however, this piece is extremely well-poised around the centre. I enjoyed the journey. Mike
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Ancientone

18 years 6 months ago

Your poem....

seems to say many things, buried in lovely, demonic words of fate, a touch of eroticism, dark and light complementing as they do in real life, the never ending circles, cycles and contraries, complements of life. A few places could use a little work, as with Cabbie but line. It does not flow well there. Nicely done. Read my The Irrational Universe for an interesting take. :) Have a great day poet friend. :) Patrick
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 6 months ago

I may be off here but to me this sound

Like a fantastic love session that you shared with a Taxi Guy hehe O I like even if I so mis inturpeted It gave me I feel ing Of past sessions with My ex But I'll just leave it at that I like I like I some times dont see the hole word and in this game a few leters out of place or left out will throw me so I must reread sevral times but the first read for me I need I ciggy and I don't smoke
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 6 months ago

Now Iam disapointed because

It sounds to me as you threw away your viginity on a dare This is a great peom it has layers within layers This is why I reread peoms Nice job of course I'm not all here sometimes I'll read this sevral more times I know it will come to lite but the discovery is the journey in which the peom comes to life
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 6 months ago

Indeed, why not?

Some of life's greatest joys can be pretty dark, pretty and dark, beautiful with pain. I am really enjoying your poetry, I come home from work at a job I love (selling books) pretty depressed because it is going all corporate and they are buying in "remainders" (books that won't sell elsewhere but they get very cheap and make a huge profit) Then I log on to NeoPoet and find beautiful honest truth from you and many others here. Thank you. cheers, Jess
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 6 months ago

Sinbad said it first well i would

add the "bad boy"found you innocent at first but you surprised him. I invite you to read "Each To Their Own" there could well be a middle ground...I like how this poem straddles the sway. In ink, david
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 6 months ago

Cabbie but

it does interupt but It sounds to me any way that you wanted thepause there I would keep it the way it is And maybe throw some more hints to what really is happen unless a myststory is want your giving
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 6 months ago

; P

if its the story your want then the story i will give... A crimson angel Adorned in wings of black Had little more than intention Strapped to her back As she strode to the sidewalk And summoned her demon cabbie See here her journey began On the streets of a hellish place, Where she came to know herself And the others without name or face, Here it shall end all too soon yet She may very well be the bravest of all You will know her only once Lady of death, collector of souls Sadly only her cabbie knows For whom her final bell tolls She smiles at you, you think you know? But sinner & saint…you have no idea hope this answers the questions haha ; P <3 Emarie
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T.Obatala

18 years 5 months ago

a feast for the brain

a feast for the brain indeed. great imagery peace obatala
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

why thank you…hope you got

why thank you...hope you got your fill "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie