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A day with my daughter

                           A day with my daughter

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I will be a luckiest of all

cause i can spend this day with her

I can enjoy her every smiles and

her lovely words to forget my worries

She will talk and  whisper many secrets in my ears

They may refresh and reorder me from my colapses

I can hold her fingers and take her to parks

to relax myself  from all past bitter hardships

I can see the dawn and the sunset

at a time in her eyes in a second

I will write a poem

before my wonderful poem

                                SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Nov 27, 2007

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theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 6 months ago

very tender

a truley tender piece that tugs at the heart. a father loves his children not because he has to but because he has no choice. this is what my grandfather told me a long time ago. i have always wanted to believe it was true and your piece helps me fell those words. well written poet!!! <3 Emarie
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barbsdad2003

18 years 6 months ago

I Too Have a Daughter ...

who's so very special. I keep telling her she's my favorite daughter. And she laughs ... because she's the only one. Thanx, Ravi. Grandpa PS: And to the commenter above: I like your "because he has no choice." Although I wish all fathers recognized (and acted as fathers on) that. Regards, Chuck