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Nov 27, 2007
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A day with my daughter
A day with my daughter
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I will be a luckiest of all
cause i can spend this day with her
I can enjoy her every smiles and
her lovely words to forget my worries
She will talk and whisper many secrets in my ears
They may refresh and reorder me from my colapses
I can hold her fingers and take her to parks
to relax myself from all past bitter hardships
I can see the dawn and the sunset
at a time in her eyes in a second
I will write a poem
before my wonderful poem
SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN
— SAKTHEEE2007, Nov 27, 2007
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theladyblue
18 years 6 months ago
very tender
barbsdad2003
18 years 6 months ago
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