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IKnowNoBox
Nov 25, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Nonphenomenal

mountain glacier  lake

still undisturbed reflection

tranquil atmosphere

— IKnowNoBox, Nov 25, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 6 months ago

Weed,Ca

a guest lodge,my road dog(fellow hitchhiker)and I decided we could swim to the other side. Well there was a nervous look between us when we reliezed there was NO BOTTOM to it and that we changed are minds when we did change little the situation we would make it back. The next morning (overcast)in the summer.the water the same tempature as the air...air that magnified the scenery.still have never seen anything so close to how I felt.Nonphenomenal. Your Tanka Exposed really stirred my Haiku. I am glad you liked it. In ink, david