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LANDSCAPE

Less a glance, more a vision
as frail as filigree glass
spun from mist and moonlight
and unsung promises
vague and veiled:
in there, somewhere,
in futures frail as gossamer,
a vision more or less.

Less a vision, more a vignette
traced in feather-light lines
and delicate delineations
of indicant possibilities
and hazy hints of hope:
in there, somewhere,
in folds of shadows shaded grey,
a vignette more or less.

Less a vignette, more a picture
blocked out in spectral hues
subtle-shaped and sculpted
fragments of heart and soul
in fixed and finite forms:
in there, somewhere,
in incandescent rainbows,
a picture more or less.

Less a picture, more a landscape
pristine and cascade pure
scaling peaks of ecstasy
and joy in verdant vestal dells
of dew-moistened moss:
in there, somewhere,
in scent of sea and sweet brown earth,
a landscape more or less.

Less a landscape, more a loving
enraptured, true, and captured
entwined in intimate exaltation
of deep desire and breathless passion 
friendship fond and tender care:
in there, somewhere,
in tears and joy and gentleness,
amour more or less.

 

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dbrock

18 years 5 months ago

Wow..i really like the

Wow..i really like the writing, but liked the format of it as well. Cool to me, the way you described the moment, then, made it even better...with the, "Less the, more than..." To me, GREAT READ this early morning! donna
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meic

18 years 5 months ago

Thank you - glad you enjoyed

Thank you - glad you enjoyed it. It seems that all too many poems celebrate the 'instant attraction' type of romance. There are others which gradually come into focus and are nevertheless as sharp, clear and passionate as 'love at first sight' ... a bit like conceiving of and painting a picture so to speak. I'm so pleased you liked the structure - I do try to make it fit the subject in each of my pieces. Thanks again for brightening my day. Mike
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 3 months ago

wow

This absolutely sings to me! I can hear your reading this in a light and flowing tone that rings in my ears! Wonderful writing my friend! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 3 months ago

wow

incredible my friend...i cant get enough! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
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barbsdad2003

16 years 9 months ago

A breathless ...

read, this. An artful piece. Wondrously vocabulaic, if I can manufacture a word (that I'll not try to look for in any dictionary). Delicate. Sensitive. Sensory. You are one helluva writer. And a good one. Thanx, Chuck
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meic

16 years 9 months ago

No, thank you, my

No, thank you, my friend! 'vocabulaic' ... like it! Mike "not all matterings of mind equal one violet" ~ e e cummings ~