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Cactus Jack

There was this houseplant at the grocery store, and ol' Jack took it in.

He promised to share his portion of sunlight, and water, and his time and effort...

..in exchange for additional oxygen for his body, compliments for his ego,

and it's beauty for his eyes and soul.

Jack was granted these things.....briefly.

 

He, in turn, was doused with the sunshine of the plant's promise,

was watered with responsibility, and was nurtured with reciprocated love.

Then, Jack's houseplant expired...due to too much water, sunlight,

and an erratic schedule, all combining to cause it's demise;

removing the extra oxygen, the compliments, and the temporary beauty.

 

Jack burried the dead houseplant outside, with a small ceremony...

..and an even smaller bouquet of lillies.....which also expired.

The houseplant was revived by the elements, and adding insult to injury...

..Jack learned, out-loud, that houseplants were not his forte'.

I did not join in the ridiculing of ol' Jack, however...

..I purchased him a cactus plant , for his punishment. His FIRST cactus plant. 

 

— docmaverick, Nov 21, 2007

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

Mark

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

umm I don't know

it would a compliment for me because it is not easy to keep a cactus plant alive (overwatering lmao poor jack) and the flowers of the cactus are extreemly signifigant and ornamental although can be on the rare side lol I have been told I got off at the wrong stop a few times but hung in and ended up pretty good at doing what it was :-) Others might best heed the warning. Nice writing Doc! Thanks, Mark
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 6 months ago

Really laughed out loud at this,

I gave a mate an "un-killable" plant because he couldn't keep plants alive. It died, he didn't,he buried it, it grew back, and he is starting to. cheers, Jess