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IKnowNoBox
Nov 19, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Grab on Tight

 render your ticket

hold onto your stub

keep any body parts

that you want to keep

inside your compartment

remain in your seat

for the entire ride

for your own safety

 

when the ride really

gets going full speed

you may get dizzy

you might even puke

but in the end it

will always be

a thrill to remember

— IKnowNoBox, Nov 19, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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barbsdad2003

18 years 6 months ago

I Think ...

this piece ought to be posted---in huge print, of course---at or near the beginning of every thrill ride at every county fair or carnival. Thanx for a fun read ... er, I mean ride. Chuck
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 6 months ago

Glad you enjoyed it ....

what is your favorite ride?I'm a Gravitron rider first class. In ink, Dabbler ps. I would like to read a poem in Chuckenese about the carnival of life.Not that I'm challenging you... I think it's a good time of year to remember the summer...to make it through the transition to winter. Step Right Uuuppp and see !!!