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Portrait of a Legacy

Sometimes I sit in wonder,

what have I to do with the color of the day?

Can I change the hues from rosey-red to blue?

has my outlook ever been so bold, as to banish the pigment with an attitude?

Affecting the rainbows in each and every eye?

What if it were up to each of us to contribute our artistic talents,

and use our own individual brush strokes,

to ensure a painting that we can be proud of?

Of course, the critics will always be in their corner,

adding brush strokes and fonts of their own;

but, if we heed them too seriously,

we may be assisting them into tricking us into using too much gray.

Yes.....we each have a pallette, and a brush...

..and the day is our canvas...

..and the world is our mural...

..and the mural will be our legacy.

— docmaverick, Nov 19, 2007

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 6 months ago

A good theme for a return to post Doc

the color of the day...I feel yellow...but look forward to a twilight blue in the next couple of days.We are out of season on the left coast and and autumn is my shades of purple time. Hues of gold to your canvas. In paint, Dabbler
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purplemoondoll

18 years 6 months ago

We each have a pallette, and a brush

I really like the way you have written this Doc. I love your work and this is one of your best poems so far. There is one tiny typing error - alwys should be always? But it doesn't spoil the overall flow for me. Using colour and art to illustrate the message behind your words is very effective and adds power to the poem. It's a message I can relate to and applaud. Nice work. Nice work.:-) Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
docmaverick

docmaverick

18 years 6 months ago

Your comments...

..are timely, as I was feelin' "blue", today. You made me feel a lighter shade purple. Thanks also for pointing out the spelling error. doc.