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Gorilla in the mist

In the CongoAnd in CameroonHunger for moneyViolence does consume Chased by huntersDeep into the hillsFirst, he hears shotsThen, he sees the kills Hiding, helplessHe sees both parents fallWith sign languageHe will tell them all Some say it's tastySome say it's a treatBut, in his eyesHe's an orphan of bushmeat His dark brown eyesFill with sadness and rageHe will spend his lifeLiving in a cage Teach the childrenAbout his fateIf we don't act  It will be too late

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purplemoondoll

18 years 5 months ago

I really like the way

You have told the story and built the description. It works well and the message is clear. The saddest thing is that gorillas have such a strong sense of family this character will likely be scarred for life for needless greed. Excellent writing. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

I totally respect your

I totally respect your commitment to issues but in this case I feel your search for rhyme takes away from the importance of what you are saying. cheers, Jess
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Michael Landau

17 years 8 months ago

thank you for your interest!

I'm not sure a exactly what part is eaten. I have heard that the hands are particularly prized for some reason. I think they are used in traditional medicine, but I'm not sure. All I know is that they are hunted for meat. Sincerely, Michael