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Nov 09, 2007
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Lies to children 3- death
S/he’s gone to sleep a long long time
S/he’s gone to a better place
S/he’s gone to burn in hell
S/he’s gone to come back to a better place
S/he’s gone.
We can remember
— weirdelf, Nov 09, 2007
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Critiques
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
I am going to go straight...
weirdelf
18 years 7 months ago
ta
Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 7 months ago
Not sure if S/He
weirdelf
18 years 7 months ago
She or he
orgami
18 years 7 months ago
fantastic poem
weirdelf
18 years 7 months ago
I take this praise with the highest regard
Barbara Writes
18 years 1 month ago
She is gone
weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
Thanks Barbara, just covering a few of the bases
rider68
18 years 1 month ago
The Concept Will Rattle
Mark
18 years 1 month ago
The things said
Candlewitch
18 years 1 month ago
both interesting and unique.
weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
Thanks, Peter, Mark, Cat
Mark
18 years 1 month ago
No biggy Jess
Nilmini
18 years ago
Differents ways to talk about Death
weirdelf
18 years ago
thanks for your deep consideration, Nilmini
RSScheerer
18 years ago
Lies to children
weirdelf
18 years ago
It's the best I can think of.