The Love Doctor has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

The Love Doctor
Has been Seclected for Publication @ Triond.com

http://authspot.com/poetry/the-love-doctor/

A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man

— Sinbadthesailorman, Nov 08, 2007

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

Critiques

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

Wow

love the love story. need a little work on flow and rhythm. For example *have just a little sip* or maybe *have a little sip* just a thought. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 2 months ago

Came across this again today

I forgot to thankyou for the advice and i some times over due the "just" thing I know. I changed two others little words slightly too, I think it flows alittle better now thanks again, sorry I took so darn long in responding, I have many excuses in my life, too many thanks for reading. Donnie/Sinbad

weirdelf

16 years 10 months ago

du uh

Cheers, Jess "The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must either be a dunce or a rogue." Emma Goldman