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IKnowNoBox
Nov 06, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Personalization

                                          

 

                                                  Passive selfrepossesion

                                                  reflection upon a

                                                 still mountain lake

                                                 cobalt with tints of gray

                                                 atmosphere for contemplation

 

                                                 cognitive purgation

                                                reflection upon a

                                                flowing concrete stream

                                                gray with tints of azure

                                                atmosphere for reclamation

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

— IKnowNoBox, Nov 06, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Ancientone

18 years 7 months ago

Good imagery....

and imagination my dear poet friend. Nature and man's constrctions compared metaphorically well! Nicely done! :) Patrick/AO
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

Thank you Patrick

It really has been a hard path to return from where I was. Contentment is exceptable,taking a little time out from liesure,and trivial amusement... it is a distance from what could have been worse... How can we reach out,when our hearts are fumbling with worries. Regards, David
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

Dig this David,

outside your style, always like to see people escaping their own boxes, it works really well for you. cheers, Jess wishing you a Salubrious Solstice