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Drowning

What makes me feel the way I do,

Some things don't change ,their simply true,

Like the first time I looked in your eyes,

The angels sang and the demons cried,

The mountains shook when I felt your arms,

When your face lit up with a smile so warm,

My heart once cold,now molten fire,

To say I didn't fall in love I would be a liar,

My soul once lost ,has now been found,

When I looked into your eyes and drowned.

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Region, Country: New York, USA

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 6 months ago

Yeah, we all know the feeling

but you added nothing poetically. Write it it on a piece of paper and burn it. It gives nothing to anyone else cheers, Jess