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SAKTHEEE2007
Nov 06, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A sip

      A Sip

                                              --- Continious rain tempted me to have a tea. Though it was day but dark at four My senses pushed me to a shop to taste a cup of hot sweet tea. I walked and reached a tea shop but there was a big queue waiting for tea Gently that queue had their cups  when my turn came, Oh sorry tea wala told me  " no milk". With a great dissoppointment asked " please give me atleast a cup black tea He gave and sipped that "devine wine." Ah ! what a taste  and how better it is A sip of tea from that cup

satisfied that moment what is there to satisfy me

I am searching the answer from the universe.

SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN

— SAKTHEEE2007, Nov 06, 2007

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purplemoondoll

18 years 7 months ago

That devine wine

This is a lovely story. You have some typing errors though so it might be worth checking through again. I really like the last line. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.