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A Spark in a word

                                  A  Spark in a word

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In a frustaeted mood ,my legs were moving

Repeated failures and defeats made me as a peeimist.

I forgotten that it was a road

There I heared from a childish voice  try to tie

A spark stimulated  my mind and

that spark glows as a great fire

That three letter word creates me as a big shot

I realised  the power of that three letters

which has shaped me as a big shot and

I engraved them in my heart and teach them too

 

SAKTHIRAVICHANDRAN        

  

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Nov 03, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 7 months ago

Is the 3 letter word God or ego?

An intriguing poem my friend, the words sparkle. If I may be so bold as to suggest some spelling corrections? frustaeted frustrated peeimist pessimist cheers, Jess