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on the laws of god

 

to put the best of spin on it,

the Laws of God

are but laws made by men

charged to imaginary god

by pompous cons of men ...

and women.

 

all, in the process

of their self-conceited

self-deception, dare

to hold themselves so to be Men

instead of merely ruthless men.

 

to put a blunter spin upon it:

proclaimed Laws of God

are but the laws of god

ascribed to god by men

who, being quite unconsciously

sick unto standing naked

psychopathic so engage

in mass deceptions:

 

they do speak with sure authority

for their god as if they know of that ...

of which of course they don't.

 

they thus do flaunt their own

presumed superiority

above the ofttimes fearful restive us.

 

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 6 months ago

Without the complex of God

the spirit is still strong. The ism and the anti ism weaken spiritual developement. The same with propaganda and counter propaganda. Weakening the individuals thoughts. Steady delivery Bard.A statement that may encourage people to think beyond God/boxes. In ink, Dabbler
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dbrock

18 years 6 months ago

i think the person who wrote

i think the person who wrote this is, aware... i think the people that read this and get it, are aware. i got it i liked it :) Donna