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Oct 31, 2007
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A Tomb to Forget
an open tomb entices me
to peek inside
Dare I ?
Oh you bet I do!
Scared?Me?
No not I
it is just a place
where a body lies
a pace away
from seeing inside
still not scared
friends taunt me from behind
I move closer
past the open grate rusty
not even a stench
as I expected
kind of disappointed
. . .
"uuo nnha .."
I Heard It Clearly
I stumbled
then dashed
you bet I did
faster then I ever had
I'll stay out of
tombs now!
— IKnowNoBox, Oct 31, 2007
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dbrock
18 years 7 months ago
Oh, we’re all crazy!
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
I am going back to my home town