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Nov 02, 2007
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gold
gold
wherever you go, you bring evening.
hair moist with the soggy gold
of Sunday grass. Tired yawn
pulling in the wet cascade
of howling leaves in
the beating pulse of your
uncertain grasp,
your gently wounded hand--
i feel broken slivers of
the afternoon sun. Yellow shafts,
the light buttercup
a fading tissue glowing in
halved ochre on the bathroom
porcelain. Next to that spotty
mirror, which shows you
something different each evening.
Comments
eric ashford
18 years 2 months ago
Yes I agree with the
IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
What little light we witness,however dim...
cricket
18 years 6 months ago
awesome
weirdelf
18 years 6 months ago
You continue to impress and make me envious
Lenny of Cohen
18 years 6 months ago
Bravo!!!
barbsdad2003
18 years 6 months ago
a crafty word order and usage here
Vasyl Puzanov
18 years 4 months ago
Stunning!
dbaker
18 years 3 months ago
Your Piece
themoonman
18 years 3 months ago
Hi quill...
RSScheerer
18 years 2 months ago
gold