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Save Me From What?

in Purgatory,they play my favorite music ...

                day after day

my  favorite food served  for breakfast lunch and dinner ...

                week after week

 with friends around me  twenty-four-seven ...

               month after month

the landscape  is also great , but stays the same ...

                 year after year

              

 

 

 

 

— IKnowNoBox, Oct 30, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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HiFlyGuy

18 years 7 months ago

My Favorite

I REALLY like this one. May I have it? Bringing light to the myth of Purgatory. Light hearted humor that is. Very well constructed. You're getting good at this stuff. Next thing, you'll be charging us to read your work. When should we expect the publication? Do we, here at the NeoPoet Society, get signed copies?
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

2

cheers, Jess wishing you a Salubrious Solstice