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SPEED-An Acrostic Tanka-

chemical roulette

racing heart and scattered mind

a deadly gamble

nobody should ever take

Keep Away From The Dealer!

— IKnowNoBox, Oct 30, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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HiFlyGuy

18 years 7 months ago

So So

Not your best work but good. It was So So for me.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

Yea I stumbled

See Rock.Sequels are hardly ever good. This is something venting. In ink, Dabbler