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IKnowNoBox
Oct 30, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Amorphic Acrostic

Illusions

    fade

away

with

a

yawn

   into a...

distorted reality ethereal and mystical

— IKnowNoBox, Oct 30, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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purplemoondoll

18 years 7 months ago

Wow

I really like this. Awesome and to the point. Nice work! Kaz x It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

Thank you Kaz

I always wanted to make words disappear from paper. In invisible ink, Dabbler
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Lenny of Cohen

18 years 7 months ago

Bullseye

as we like to say when running from a small dog. Seriously, I like this. Made me smile, simple, and so true. Lenny
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dbrock

18 years 7 months ago

to me, this is COOL!!! I

to me, this is COOL!!! I like when you can say so much in few words & still get great emotion! ...well done donna
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TheRealTearsICry

18 years 7 months ago

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nice.
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TheRealTearsICry

18 years 7 months ago

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nice.
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 7 months ago

You are a cunning bastard!

The acrostic is often a trite word play, but you imbue it with a deep touch. A master of the form! cheers, Jess
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

Thany you Jess

I always wanted to pull a poem out of thin air.well there was five in this one last I counted,probly just an illusion. "Along the way I saw a word with many words inside it" In ink, Dabid
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Ancientone

18 years 7 months ago

As all....

acrostics have titles that bear the signature of it in the first letter of each line, you have your title automatically my friend, Ifawayid, think about the last part, make appropriate changes as you choose and fini! Nice transition from illusory to mystical reality. Nicely done, now finish for posterity. :) Patrick/AO
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

I'll Fade away with a yawn into a dream....

I used fade... in both streams as well as into... Illusions fade away with a yawn into a distorted reality ethereal and mystical D r e a m using another acrostic variations thus amorphic,or am I misusing amorphic... Glad you liked it AO. ,kni ni relbbaD