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Oct 29, 2007
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A Soldier's Story
Dressed in a soldier’s attire
His young son he has come to admire
Come give dad a hug, he states
A statement that he anticipates
Uncle Sam calls for his service once more
To his wife he says, “Someday we will be like before”
As he salutes the flag men have died to protect
His wife under her breath silently does object
When he enters the cab his son yells dad please stay
With tears in his eyes he waves as the cab drives away
The commanding officer barks orders and he’s ready to fight
No home cooked meal and hours of “sports center” tonight
“The battle field in Baghdad is no picnic”, according to his friend
No lie there, but America is what he was born to defend
The first night no action just helping others in need
How he wanted to be home but first he needs to succeed
The next day he hears gunshots nearby as he ducks his head
After the shootings he gazes petrified, as the remaining carry away the dead
Weeks turn into months, as he counts the days till he departs
These men he says deserve more than honor and purple hearts
It’s been a year and Uncle Sam finally let him go to his wife
And a son who is worth more to him than his very own life
That night he packs his things as the gun fire escalates
Poor Jim falls to his knees as he sees a glimpse of heavenly gates
A shot to the chest is what the medic screams
After much help from army medical teams
He wakes up to the sound of an eager young man
He shouts “Dad did you beat the Taliban”
His wife looks at him and wipes his tears
As he thanks the lord for all of his years
— paul, Oct 29, 2007
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wolfycat
18 years 7 months ago
This made me think...
Mark
18 years 7 months ago
Well done Paul
southern_voice15
18 years 7 months ago
hmmm
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