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Interpretive Dance

A lady, reclining on a bench, watches the rapmobiles drive by.

The pavement quakes with their passing.

They pull in across the road to feed their shaking, vibrating beasts

At the auto restaurant.

Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom!

She has a decisive, gleeful thought.

Standing suddenly, she gets up and dances to the beat of the shiny

Rap monsters.

Everyone immediately turns to face her from across the road.

Mouths become slack and jaws drop.

The beast's owners stare uncomfortably at the spectacle

Unfolding before them.

She hears them over the ever loudening bass rumble...

"Man, look at that crazy lady!"

She laughs out loud with an insane sort of grin and replies...

"Hey! I'm down wit it!"

They shake their heads in disbelief.

But she knows something that they do not know.

Number 1...she is crazy,

And number 2...she does not care.

Bow mow chick a mow wow!!

 

Wolfycat

 

 

 

— wolfycat, Oct 28, 2007

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purplemoondoll

18 years 7 months ago

Brilliant

LMAO. This is spot on Wolfycat! Very well done. I really like the idea of rap monsters. Living in a small village we havent had too much of this until recently - lol but now we have the Bodham posse. Trust me it has to be seen to be believed - all 14 years of age 'wiv attitood!'. (Try saying this with a broad Norfolk accent and you'll get the idea lol). This poem tells a great story, love the imagery you have created. I really enjoyed reading this! Thanks. Kaz x It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 7 months ago

:) Thanks Kaz...

I appreciate so very much you reading and understanding this write. Best Wishes, Wolfycat.
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 7 months ago

Thanks Dabbler!

Thanks for reading, Dabbler! Dabbler, you ought to write about it too. I'd love to hear your take on it. Wolfy.