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Oct 27, 2007
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Pretty Broken (Acrostic)
banged up around the edge she seems a little silly some times
really it is a charm of hers,I kid you not the simple things she says
or the little phrases she uses so randomly,haphazardly scattered about
keeps me red faced for hours with just the simplest reply unexpected
everything else she shares tells me she has been exposed to torment
now I see healing and confidence, a pretty girl on a country path
— IKnowNoBox, Oct 27, 2007
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TheRealTearsICry
18 years 7 months ago
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IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
....sigh....
TheRealTearsICry
18 years 7 months ago
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Mark
18 years 7 months ago
I like it all very much
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
Thank you mark
wolfycat
18 years 7 months ago
A sweet poem...
HiFlyGuy
18 years 7 months ago
Nicely done
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
Thank you
Ancientone
18 years 7 months ago
Punctuation....
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
Thank you AO
Mark
18 years 7 months ago
wow the spotlight area has this messed up a bit - LOT
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
It still works as an acrostic
marcm
18 years 7 months ago
Well done! I sort of feel as
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
We all know somebody like her
washing tears
18 years 7 months ago
i like this alot, it reminds
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
Thank You Washing tears
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
Thank You Washing tears
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
Thank You Washing tears
dbrock
18 years 7 months ago
…yet another great read!
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
Julie the Brave thought the same thing