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When I Don't Listen

"Shut Up Gut it isn't as it seems."

are you sure ?Well lets look a the record

pages turn in my stomach....

heres one I was right you where wrong

should have ...listened

another one not to bad still could have helped

if you had done something earlier

and here oh you listened and saved a boss

well credit were it's due wish you had learned

now about this call,well I said my peace

I'll be back if i need to tell you" I Told You So"

 

 

 

— IKnowNoBox, Oct 27, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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TheRealTearsICry

18 years 7 months ago

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nice poem but then again all your poems are really really good.