Real Fire

flames in the hills
L.A. set ablaze
Sending the stars
fleeing from their
heaven smoking
celibrity memories
Hetchy can't hold
a candle to
Tinsle Towns torch

— IKnowNoBox, Oct 26, 2007

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

Critiques

Conect11

18 years 7 months ago

I hope

firstly that you are not in harm's way and secondly I wish I could right such eloquance. You bring sharpness and a cunning acerbic wit to this, I dig alot. Mark W.

IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

Thanks Mark I am out of harms way

I have abrother that lives down there,the smoke is visable in our sunset. In ink, Dabbler

Ancientone

18 years 7 months ago

saw earlier and meant to come back to it, like you my mind is not altogether today. I wrote about this too, but think I only posted on the other poet site so far, called What is Sunshine? Will post it here after I review the other poem you suggested. Thanks, Patrick