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SAKTHEEE2007
Oct 25, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Guide

Guide
Dawn guides the earth to wards to it's twilight
Eve guides the sky
towards to it's dawn
Rain guides the earth
towards to a river
The river guides the
gutters towards to a sea
The sea prays the sun
to keep the earth evergreen
Birth guides the lives towards to it's death
The death guides the souls
towards the gates of heaven But
we forget all
to follow the rules of  Thee

SAKTHIRAVICHANDRAN


 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Oct 25, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 7 months ago

I may be presumptious,

But I feel this is a gift to me. I hope your other readers feel the same cheers, your brother and friend, Jess p.s. One small niggle, I feel if you read the other poems on this site carefully, with your insight and creativity, you could help the poets who are also striving by giving comments. Don't be afraid to be critical "it is very nice" is not enough.