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Battle Scars

I’ll fight the world
With my hearts bones
And with your tears
And here we will run
Until the sun wont burn
And we fill all our heads with restless dreams
And question mark ends with breatheless screams
But we all wake up to some harsh reality
But here I lay inside your arms
Away from the pain
And in the eyes of fate
 
And ill fight the world
With butterfly tears
And I’ll waste the longest years
But her e I rest inside your eyes
But love won’t subside
The world turns from the light
But I held your heart, in my hands from the start

 


Take- me away
Take- me away so my heart will sing
Take- me away so my bones will bring
Take- me away so my life could be
Take- me away so I could be yours-, ill be yours-

 


I fight the world
With dinosaur bones
And all my hearts pain
But yours heals my wounds

— washing tears, Oct 23, 2007

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Region, Country: sandusky, ohio, USA

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purplemoondoll

18 years 7 months ago

Yes I like this

You have used some brilliant expressions. I really like these lines:- I fight the world With dinosaur bones And all my hearts pain But yours heals my wounds I also like the idea of butterfly tears. The whole piece flows well and the emotion is clearly felt. Just watch your typing in places, there are a couple of punctuation errors. Nice work Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.