Maybe... Everyday (submited for EyeZ street geist)

A beautiful cry of a heart that is searching...A sensitive soul (maybe hurt one too many times)...tired of the struggle, but knowing that there is always tomorrow...to try again. Life is precious, to this sensitive soul...whoever you may be! Wolfy Cat.

not sure who "eyez street geist" is, but if you wrote this, i definitely appreciate the pain and the loneliness you express so poignantly--i just know you can do better, though. the commas need to be spaced and the lines spruced up a bit (though i'm not sure if that's really a concern of yours or not, if not my apologies). i loved, but i know you can do better!

The rawness of emotion is felt and appreciated,even sympathised with I think the inconsistencies don't detract at all only the emotion is felt. Lovely piece, Lacy,

that everything can still work out fine, only it´s a long and stony path to follow. I happen to know that because my brother used to be one of those people in the streets once. That was ten years ago, and now he´s found himself a job he likes, is highly appreciated by his boss and has a nice 2bedroom-flat and a car. He finally stopped taking drugs last year and hasn´t been suicidal since. He´s still taking it on one day at a time though. I sense that your friend hasn´t given up ("survival is my new mission"). She´s to keep fighting for her dreams to make them come true! Nobody else will do it for her! ID

has already heard her cry obviously my friend! Wishing her luck and finding Enough, a poem I wrote for folks like her, give her a copy after I post it. Have a great day friend. Patrick