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PENANCE

Penance
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She was in a penance
to save this earth
They were in a penance
to get rid of from the tyrant rulers
We will have to be in a penance
to promote Her in this world
We will have to be in a penance
to protect her from he hands of violence and terrorism
Our penance should aim
to keep her, best in this world always

 

 

SAKTHIRAVICHANDRAN

GODDESS DURGA HAD A GREAT VICTORY ON THE END OF HER PENANCE
OUR ANCESTORS ALSO
HAD A GREAT VICTORY
ON THEIR PENANCE
WE WILL HAVE TO ACQUIRE SUCH VICTORIES

— SAKTHEEE2007, Oct 22, 2007

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Mark

Mark

18 years 7 months ago

Sakthi wow!

This is amazing I really love it. Imagine if it were so - wow. Such hope here and emotion I love it am saying it again lol Thanks so much, Mark you might want to put his in the place of he - nothing wrong with a litle edit. Thanks again :-)