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IKnowNoBox
Oct 21, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The World Tomorrow

how did I see

the world tomorrow

which is to be shown

to the children

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how did I hear

the world tomorrow

which is to be spoken

to the child

— IKnowNoBox, Oct 21, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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purplemoondoll

18 years 7 months ago

Really LIke This

Excellent write! how did I hear the world tomorrow which is to be spoken to the child These lines made me think. Cheers - Kaz x It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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TheRealTearsICry

18 years 7 months ago

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i really liked it.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

Thank you

We worry to much about the future,we take our eyes off of today.
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Patthepoet

18 years 3 months ago

The World Tomorrow

This is a very thought provoking poem. Our world tomorrow will be built on our world today. Let us hope it has a firm foundation. I liked your words. PL.