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Calliope
Oct 24, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The View

She's lost her way a hundred times

She's fallen so hard ,yet,still she climbs

Her pride won't let her stop

She must make it to the top

She has to see the view

Anything less will not do

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Region, Country: New York, USA

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Conect11

18 years 6 months ago

a good

simple sentiment set in an average poem. Mark W.
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HiFlyGuy

18 years 6 months ago

To View or not to View...

Lost in her own pride I'd say. It feels like something is missing or not completed in this one. Sorry, but not as well done as some of your others but a noble effort.