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Love,Death, and Rain

  "Drain the last drop,' she said to him, 'Then place a kiss upon my skin. Kiss my lips and dine on me. Leave your mark, your sign on me.I'll love you untill the moon meets the sun. Then I'll swear my love again when the end has begun. My love will not die upon my death ,but fly forever on the wings of my last breath.Remember,' she said, 'Though you leave me now, to return to me no matter how. Speak through dreams or straight to the heart.For even in death ,we shall never part.So take your fill, fill your veins.And think of this moment whenever it rains.'

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Region, Country: New York, USA

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orgami

18 years 6 months ago

soft silky slip of kiss

and this rain falls in memory forever shiver as you press closer leaning back to take your fill slaking that tired thirst that hunger that dwells behind each canine smile moon fills you with dashing illusion ... uhh Yah I love your poem got carried away just writing here
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RSScheerer

18 years 6 months ago

Whisper

Evokes images of a lover's promise in a whisper. The quotation marks add to the voice; give it an undeniable reality. Your choice to present this piece as a paragraph was a good one.
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Calliope

18 years 2 months ago

Thank you all

...for your wonderful comments.This one is one of my favorites.I had thought of publishing my own book of poetry,but first I have to master it,lol.This was to be the title'Love,Death,and Rain;A Poets Journey'.What do you think? Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.