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Earth Rising

Now's the time,

To save the earth,

Yell and scream,

For all your worth.

 

The other leaders,

Of the planet,

Have told George Bush,

That he can can it.

 

His environmental attacks,

Show that he only cares,

About making greenbacks.

 

Every day,

He pleads and toils,

For those who make,

Petroleum oils.

 

His poor judgment,

Comes at high cost,

In the next election,

His party will be tossed!

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purplemoondoll

18 years 6 months ago

What's a Greenback?

Forgive my ignorance but I have never come across this expression. Maybe thats because I live in the UK? I like the political edge and applaud the message. I am all for environmental causes but the spin doctors annoy me especially when the cause is being promoted solely for votes and nothing else! Cheers Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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purplemoondoll

18 years 6 months ago

Thanks

That gives the poem an even sharper edge - well done. Great writing . Kaz x It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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Michael Landau

18 years 3 months ago

I thought this information might be of interest to others.

I found this information on the Internet. Someone asked me a question about the history of the term greenback. I thought someone would find the following information interesting. "There was no central bank in 1861. The Second Bank of the United States had been shut down by President Andrew Jackson. No national currency existed, and gold, silver, and copper were scarce, so only a limited number of coins could be minted. The existing supply of money was grossly inadequate to provide the enormous amount of funds the wartime government required. "To make matters worse, the banking system was in chaos. In the years immediately before the Civil War, roughly sixteen hundred state-chartered banks dotted the American landscape, each issuing its own notes. Roughly seven thousand varieties of banknotes were in circulation. Some were issued by legitimate state-chartered banks, but many were of dubious quality or simply counterfeit. Notes issued by banks that had been closed for years or were in default, as well as those bearing the names of fictional banks, were all part of the bewildering currency melange of the 1850s. Even notes of legitimate banks tended to lose a significant portion of their value when they were presented at a great distance from issuing banks. The banking system was haphazard and virtually unregulated. "Because the notes of state-chartered banks were generally accepted only in the state of the issuing bank, the government had difficulty in procuring goods and services for the military, just as it did during the War of 1812. Taxes paid in notes issued by a bank in one state generally could not be used to purchase supplies in another state. ... [So a bill was introduced for] a new United States currency ... to be accepted for all private transactions, but not redeemable for specie. ... The idea immediately drew fire on the House floor. The horrible precedent of the Continentals [during the Revolutionary War] was frequently cited, with one congressman saying 'the wit of man has never discovered a means by which paper currency can be kept at par value, except by speedy, cheap certain convertibility into gold and silver.' [But] desperate for cash, ... late in February 1862, Congress passed the Legal Tender Act. ... "The new 'legal tender' was printed with green ink on one side, and the notes were quickly nicknamed 'greenbacks.' (Confederate currency, printed with blue-gray ink, was known as 'blue backs.') ... The $450 million worth of greenbacks that were issued covered nearly 15 percent of the cost of the war ... and created 25 percent annual inflation. ... The Confederacy fared much worse ... with 9,000 percent inflation, caused primarily by far greater resort to the printing press." Robert D. Hormats, The Price of Liberty, Times Books, Copyright 2007 by Robert D. Hormat, pp. 75-78.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 6 months ago

Well said Michaell

Good use of fact. The other leaders, Of the planet, Have told George Bush, That he can can it. lol THIS STANZA! bYE Bye Bush....What an ending. In ink, IKnowNoBox
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DDCdogood

18 years 6 months ago

Last Stanza

DDCdogood Hate to be nit picky, but in the last stanza,last line 'Hs party will be tossed!' I think you mean His. But the piece was straight foward, although I liked it and it's message, poetry about politics and religion, I think, mind you; is for another forum. Hey that't me. Political references yes, religious ex partes help, i.e. [Angels, Demons of fear, The light of heaven,etc]. But sometimes politics seem to drag in too many opinions, not that that is bad,or anything. To many subjects [politics] can dilute your piece. But there is a difference between prose and verse in Elizibethan poetry, [which is the most well known of any forms.] Which I think this piece, lends it self to. Prose is more of substance and verse is about form. Good form but needs better substance. Peace, DDC
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Michael Landau

18 years 6 months ago

thank-you everyone for your comments!

Earlier I wrote a comment here, and now I want to delete it, but it has come to my attention that it is only possible to edit comments. It is not possible to delete them. So, I would like to take this opportunity to thank everyone for their comments and also apologize for my lack of understanding of the way things work around here. It has been a very slow learning process for me. I promise to do better in the future. Thanks, Michael
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weirdelf

18 years 6 months ago

When I make a comment I regret I edit it

I have made some truly offensive comments on this site. I apologise but you can't take words back. Michael, you have made some faux pas, but I truly believe that you are trying to do your best in a spirit of generousity. The people who have taken offense at your words have offered at least to leave each other alone. Poetry is so very, very personal. May I offer a few suggestions? Quote the lines you think work well. If you feel something doesn't work well don't offer a re-phrasing, let them work it out for themself. I believe you care and want to participate. I support you in this, with respect, Jess