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The Passage Of Time "Tanka"

Man takes. Over time

Everything starts to die.

Where is God in this!

But oh, He gives us free will

To choose or not to choose… Him.

 

Wolfycat

10/16/07

— wolfycat, Oct 16, 2007

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

I see your faith is stronge Cat

and anchored in spirit.A blend of faith and nature. I feel you may have went thrift on the fourth line.take another shot at it after a walk.I think you'll find a line. I'll be back. In ink, David
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 6 months ago

Intrigued

I'm seeing a lot of discontent here with Most writers on the free will syndrome is like I want I need I must have let me be why did not you intervine I to feel the need for such intervention Again though free will aint it a pill over sized and hard to swallow Donnie The book of Job is a writers well of water stagnate or pure is still up to you for sure free will God Makes his self clear to me in this book But I prefer Psalms to it oh by the way I'm a horrible speller sorry no spell check in these little boxes
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years ago

The Book of Job...

On my, an ancient and beautiful book. Chapter 33 literally set me free. It explained all of my struggles and answered so many questions. Love Psalms too. cat