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Oct 16, 2007
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God came to my home
God came to my home
He came to my home in an lunch time
in a rags and with oldage
He begged a cup of meals
to his burning stomach
His eyes were dim and small and
his voice is feeble to hear
With pity ,I called him to my table
and shared my meals with him
After finishing our meals,I saw
a light and smile in his face
In his smile and light ,I saw
Him .yes ,I saw him.
There He was a God his smile and light in his face is God
Who came to my bless my home.
SakthiRavichandran
— SAKTHEEE2007, Oct 16, 2007
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IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
You poem Seperates God from Religion
wolfycat
18 years 7 months ago
:)
weirdelf
18 years 7 months ago
Yes, the spirit remarkable and remarkable friend.