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God came to my home

God came to my home

He came to my home in an lunch time

in a rags and with oldage

He begged a cup of  meals

to his burning stomach

His eyes were dim and small and

his voice is feeble to hear

With pity ,I called him to my table

and shared my meals with him

After finishing our meals,I saw

a light and smile in his face

In his smile and light ,I saw

Him .yes ,I saw him.

There  He was a God his smile and light in his face is God

Who came to my bless my home.

 

SakthiRavichandran

— SAKTHEEE2007, Oct 16, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 7 months ago

Yes, the spirit remarkable and remarkable friend.

This is deeply spiritual and beautiful. It is wonderful to me to see your poetry getting better and better. Your bright un-selfconscious voice speaks to my jaded post-modern soul. A note on punctuation. The space comes after, not before, e.g. "Him .yes ,I saw him." should be "Him. yes, I saw him.". See? cheers, Jess "Are we having fun yet?"