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wolfycat
wolfycat
Oct 14, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Haiku For David

Fall leaves

Floating lazily down from high

We dreamily watch them fly

 

Wolfy

10/14/07

— wolfycat, Oct 14, 2007

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

The way you scatter the lines....

Just like leaves fall.Intentional or not that really delivers this poem like an autumn wind. I would write it on the glass cover of a frame ,with the first autumn leaf pressed behind it. In ink, David
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 7 months ago

Creative...

I would have liked to have seen them. I imagine they were beautiful. Wolfy.