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IKnowNoBox
Oct 14, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Teach Each Other-Tanka

 some things are instict

others we must learn daily

we also study

numerous books of referance

may we never quit learning

 

— IKnowNoBox, Oct 14, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Quillsvein1

18 years 7 months ago

an

inspirational piece, to be sure--"somethings we just know...." indeed! we are not tabula rasas or whatever they call them: you should be probably check "referrance", i don't know if you meant to spell reference that way for the purpose of the haiku or not--it's a neat piece either way, somehow full of enthusiasm and glowing with life. great job.
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Ink Dragon

18 years 7 months ago

In addition

please check: somethings/some things and quite/quit. You really ought to pay more attention to your spelling, the mistakes might make some people not take your work seriously, which would be a real pity! Otherwise, a really good one!ID
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Calliope

18 years 7 months ago

I don't know much...

...about different types of poetry[may we never quit learning]but i would call this a quote peice ,for it is worth quoting. Lacy,